A Quick Writing Course from John McPhee

I used to teach a class in creative nonfiction (a descendent of the “New Journalism” of the 1960s-1970s). If there is an American master of creative nonfiction, it would be John McPhee.

I could have just taken this long interview with McPhee from The Paris Review, chopped it into bits, and had most of a semester’s worth of lecture notes. It’s that good.

A few excerpts—here is McPhee on choosing what or whom to write about:

I certainly don’t go around looking for loners, but I guess I am interested in people who are expert at something, because they’re going to lead me into some field, teach it to me, and then in turn I’m going to tell others about it. The ideal situation is to be watching somebody do their thing, and they don’t give a damn about you because they’re so absorbed. They’re confident about what they’re doing, and they’re not at all consumed with self-consciousness.

I used to tell all my students, particularly those just starting out, to read their stuff aloud. (It’s amazing how many students cannot read aloud comfortably.) McPhee does it:

Certainly the aural part of writing is a big, big thing to me. I can’t stand a sentence until it sounds right, and I’ll go over it again and again. Once the sentence rolls along in a certain way, that’s sentence A. Sentence B may work out well, but then its effect on sentence A may spoil the rhythm of the two together. One of the long-term things about knitting a piece of writing together is making all this stuff fit.

I always read the second draft aloud, as a way of moving forward. I read primarily to my wife, Yolanda, and I also have a friend whom I read to. I read aloud so I can hear if it’s fitting together or not. It’s just as much a part of the composition as going out and buying a ream of paper.

And here is an excerpt from a section of the interview where he talks about how creative nonfiction pieces develop their own structure—and how that structure can be manipulated.

But what if you started telling the piece of writing further down the river, I wondered. That way, when you get to the end of the trip, you’re really only halfway through the story. What you do then is switch to the past tense, creating a flashback, and you back up and start your trip over again. By the time you get to that bear, that bear is at the perfect place for a climax. That’s what’s exciting about nonfiction writing. In this case it’s a simple flashback, but it also echoes all these cycles of the present and the past.

Read the whole interview here.

Memory is a Tricky Thing

I recently emailed my cousin when I ran across a Web page mentioning the man whom I thought was our grandfather’s business partner in a Tulsa, Oklahoma, menswear store.

No, she said, our grandfather had been the manager but never a partner.

Once again, if I were trying to write a memoir based on my own memories, I would get another detail wrong.

And that is the problem: Our memories are rigged.

We don’t remember what happens, but we let other, archetypal stories shape our memories.

And, as this brief NPR piece also points out, we see patterns where there are none.

I did learn that much as a young guy when I got a job servicing slot machines in a variety of logger bars and VFW halls in western Oregon.

People always thought they saw patterns: “That machine is ready to pay out.”

Nope, every spin is a fresh universe, so to speak.

But if people really understood probabilities, state lotteries would go bust.

Green Egg Sponsors a Podcast

Oberon Zell, co-founder of the long-lived Pagan zine/magazine/ezine Green Egg, and Ariel Monserrat, its current editor, have started podcasting.

On “Over to Oberon & Ariel” this Wed. June 1, our special guest will be Sylveey Selu, founder of the Pentacle Project. Learn what the Pentacle Project is and how you can help. The Pentacle Project was formed to help Pagans become aware of the attacks on Pagans in the Bible Belt by extreme-right Dominionist Christians. Learn about the rising wave of militant, uber-fundamentalist Christians, what they think and why they are a threat to the rest of America, not just Pagans.

Ariel and I are planning many exciting shows to come, with compelling topics and fascinating guests. Through more than 40 years of publishing Green Egg, both in print and now online, Ariel and I have come to know the most interesting, knowledgeable, and erudite personalities on the leading edge of Gaea’s evolving consciousness. Join us on “Over to Oberon & Ariel!”

You can hear or download their first attempt here, via Witch School’s Blog Talk Radio channel, “Pagans Tonight.” Oberon and Ariel do not come on until an hour into the podcast—before that is an hour of Witch School founder Ed Hubbard maundering about tornadoes and what not.

I wish them well, but my considered opinion is that verbal podcasting is harder that it seems.  (Musical podcasting seems to work better.)

You have the format of two people, usually not in the same room, making forced small talk—or even a bunch of people, not in the same room, kicking topics around and making in-jokes with each other. (Example, NSFW.)

Howard Stern does it better—and I don’t listen to him either much.

Maybe I’m just grumpy because I see no time in my day for listening to an hour or two of chat. My  80 minutes of  car commuting used to provide lots of listening time, but you won’t hear me saying that I want to go back to that!

Trapped on Block Island

"Block Island" -- portion of a cartoon from the June 27, 1994 New Yorker magazine

Randy Cassingham makes the argument: “There is no such thing as writer’s block” and invokes the “10,000 hour rule.”

I used to tell students, “The first million words are just for practice.” But you can count blog posts on your way to the million.

Cassingham’s version of a traditional exercise:

But one day he told me he was “blocked” and hadn’t written anything for weeks. I went over to his house and said, “Want me to fix that for you?” He didn’t know what I was up to, but he definitely wanted help, so I gave him this assignment: sit his ass in front of his computer and start writing — right now! I told him that I would come back in half an hour. Here’s the key to my method: I said if he could think of nothing else to write, he was to type “I have nothing I want to say” over and over and over again, until he had something better than that to write.

 

The Very Model of a Pagan Intellectual

Nothing about Wikipedia in it, but Brendan Myers has a little fun with Gilbert and Sullivan: “I am the Very Model of a Pagan Intellectual.”

And if that does not make you chuckle, you need to acquaint yourself with the original, from HMS Pinafore.

Of course, rhyming “Wikipedia” would be a challenge.

Wikipedia and the Pagan Academics

Last weekend Cara Schulz wrote a piece on the trouble some Pagan writers were having with Wikipedia.

It started when people noticed some Pagan-related entries, such as “Paganistan” being flagged for deletion. Much editorial chat ensued.

Brendan Cathbad Myers, author of The Other Side of Virtue and other books, saw his entry flagged as insufficiently notable.

It looks as though some on Wikipedia are trying to introduce more rigor to the entries, although I would hate to see Pagan-related entries suffer because of that.

Academics, meanwhile, have tended to shun Wikipedia. Many advise their students never to cite it as a source because of its alleged unreliability.

So it caught my attention when I read that some psychologists have decided to embrace it.

Anthony G. Greenwald, a professor of psychology at the University of Washington who was watching the editing demonstration, said he has asked seven students in his “Implicit and Unconscious Cognition” course to work on Wikipedia articles as part of the coursework. “This is repair work,” he said. “There is so much in Wikipedia that is inadequate.” Or plain inaccurate, said Alan G. Kraut, the association’s executive director.

But getting academics to fix it is a tall order,[Harvard psychology professor Mahzarin R.] Banaji admitted. “I know my colleagues won’t really want to write Wikipedia articles. It just won’t be seen as important, because it isn’t going on their CV,” she said.

So the solution is to have graduate students write or revise the Wikipedia entries.

Well, that approach might work for Pagan studies grad students too. I think it is time to propose such a move.

Zing that Taupe Floozy

And twenty-three other words first recorded in English in 1911.

Lexi-blogger Dave Wilton has started an ongoing series of new words of the year on his blog Wordorigins.org, which I will be adding to the blogroll here.

I tried to select twenty-six words, one for each letter of the alphabet. But in some cases I’ve got more than one for a particular letter, in others none. My selection is not scientific or systematic; it is based on what I think is interesting; Sometimes they are words that appear earlier or later than I would have thought; others have a particular historical affiliation for that year or represent some historical trend; and others are just odd words. I’m avoiding back-formations and variations on existing words. Again, be warned that the coining of a word does not necessarily coincide with the invention of a concept. Often, there will be older words that express the same sense.

Creative Visualization Doesn’t Work?

Or so claim researchers who publish in the Journal of Experimental Social Psychology.

Or is it just fantasies (winning the lottery, etc.) that don’t work?

But ultimately, Happes and Oettingen believe that positive fantasies are likely to scupper your changes of obtaining your goals. “Instead of promoting achievement, positive fantasies will sap job-seekers of the energy to pound the pavement, and drain the lovelorn of the energy to approach the one they like,” they write. “Fantasies that are less positive – that question whether an ideal future can be achieved, and that depict obstacles, problems and setbacks – should be more beneficial for mustering the energy needed to obtain success.”

What do you think of the experiment design compared to an actual visualization?

And this zinger at the end:

This study isn’t the first to explode the myth of a traditional self-help tool. A 2009 paper found that repeating positive mantras about themselves led people low in self-esteem to feel worse.

Pope: You Can’t Dance

Sister Nobili, the dancing nun (BBC News)

Sister Nobili, the dancing nun (BBC News)

A century or more ago, the anarchist Emma Goldman told one of her earnest lefty comrades that dancing and “the revolution” were not incompatible, which became the source of various mangled quotations attributed to her.

But evidently the pope feels that nuns who won’t stop dancing don’t fit in with the Roman Catholic church.

And an ex-fashion designer abbot? Very suspicious.

No kinetic stuff! Just genuflecting!

Gaulimaufry with Pulleys and Cables

• The force of Artemis is strong in this one.

The Renaissance Faire as spiritual experience: “These days I’m more inclined to find the spiritual in the secular, and to look for it in places you might not ordinarily expect to find it, than I am to go seeking out a prepackaged religious experience.”

• A list of the “Pagan Mom blogs” that need your votes at the Circle of Moms.